July 10. 2020
Universe of Two by Stephen P. Kiernan
At the height of World War II, mathematician Charlie Fish is pulled from
Harvard University immediately after graduation and assigned to the Manhattan
Project at the University of Chicago.
For security purposes, each scientist is assigned a single task and
forbidden to share his assignment with the others working on the project. Charlie finds himself assigned first to
figuring out complex arcs, and later to soldering complicated components. After a few months, he is reassigned to Los
Alamos in New Mexico.
While living in Chicago, Charlie meets a girl named Brenda who works in her
family’s music store, demonstrating and selling organs. Brenda is a lot more interested in all the
soldiers on leave than she is in the war or even in Charlie.
When Charlie leaves for New Mexico, he and Brenda agree to write to each
other, but that doesn’t stop Brenda from pursuing what she sees as an innocent
flirtation with a high school friend, a pilot on leave from the air force. When the pilot’s intentions turn out to be
far more serious than Brenda’s, she decides to follow Charlie to New
Mexico. The bits and pieces that Charlie
has been working on turn out to be the detonator for the atomic bomb, and when
Charlie realizes the devastation that the weapon will wreak, he is overwhelmed
with guilt. Although Brenda urges him at
first to go on with his work, once the first bomb is dropped, they are both
overcome with remorse, and their great mental anguish affects their
relationship.
The story line is based on the life of Charles Fisk, a real mathematician
who worked in Los Alamos on the atomic bomb.
The reader knows almost immediately what Charlie is working on, and it
should have been a great home front story. The secrecy surrounding the project and the devastation that the bomb caused are described well, and there is good research here. But unfortunately, the story drags and would have been improved by some
editing that cut out 50-100 pages (did we REALLY have to hear about all 23 of Charlie's failed attempts to build the detonator, until another character waltzes in and tells him how to do it?).
There
are characters who make no contribution to the story – one character in
particular, Mather, is extremely unlikeable and taunts Charlie throughout the
book, for no apparent reason other than he thinks he’s smarter than
Charlie. The truly annoying thing is that there is no resolution to their "conflict" - Charlie and Brenda just move away. There is another character named Beasley who is supposed to teach Charlie how to solder, and instead he is a complete asshole - could have done without him, too. Why not just put Charlie in a lab by himself with a soldering iron and tell him to see what he can do? Again, no character resolution. Other characters are introduced but then disappear - Charlie's friend Monroe resigns from the project one day and vanishes, a cat adopts Charlie in New
Mexico, and then disappears with no explanation. A character should be introduced because they will move the story forward in some way.
The author also did not write his female
characters very well. I did not connect
at all with Brenda – she was selfish and pushy, and then all of a sudden, she has
turned into a mature woman who helped her husband through a difficult time,
but we don’t know how this transformation came about. There is also too much about their sex life after they get married,
coming rather late in the book, that didn’t add anything to the story. I didn't need to hear about all the times and places they had sex, and what kind of underwear Brenda wore. You can tell a guy wrote the book, because that's the kind of stuff guys are interested in. Too much interest in and description of clothes, in general.
Disappointing overall.
Many thanks to NetGalley and the publisher for providing an eARC in return for a review.